tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-461733152699761921.post5009064948146748022..comments2010-11-14T09:51:46.902-08:00Comments on Scallops - A writer's attempts to come out of her shell...: My First StoryLorna Walshhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09417943997963411841noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-461733152699761921.post-70275254572712034602010-11-14T09:51:46.902-08:002010-11-14T09:51:46.902-08:00Thanks Adrienne! For both your comments and your ...Thanks Adrienne! For both your comments and your correction -proof reading is not my strong point! I need a professional eye, like yours...Lorna Walshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09417943997963411841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-461733152699761921.post-18257085439530403442010-11-12T12:55:33.250-08:002010-11-12T12:55:33.250-08:00Very enjoyable story, Lorna. Funny and dark, as yo...Very enjoyable story, Lorna. Funny and dark, as you do so well. Nice details and jauntily written. Impressed by your early ability to write about others, not just self. Wonder why you've decided not to try publishing it. I guess we all get sick of our old stuff. <br /> <br />(Typo on paragraph 6: '...slowly passed [past] the mute stairs...'--You can take the girl out of the writing group, but you can't take the writing group out of the girl!)blog authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14271378346187755618noreply@blogger.com