Auntie's Short Stories

I've said it before and I'll say it again: Godbless BBC Radio 4. And I'm not the religious type, but it truly is a saviour for us Brits abroad. Anyway, check out the readings of the shortlisted finalists of the National Short Story Award 2011: http://www.bbc.co.uk/programmes/b014kprn

I've just listened to Rag Love by MJ Hyland, a tale of two lovers with a plan to have sex on a luxury cruise liner.

As a listener, I was underwhelmed. The characters and their relationship lacked depth, their 'plan' was trite, the ticking clock didn't generate enough tension...and my biggest issue was the bland description of the luxury liner. "A perfect blue rectangle" described the pool and "two chairs and a glass coffee table" described the penthouse. There were several other examples too dull to remember. And, for something set in Australia and in the 1960s, there wasn't enough detail to justify these setting choices. My final thought is that the story didn't contain anything especially profound in the words or the theme, I thought - it had resolution but no resonance, for my taste at least.

But the esteemed panel of judges saw something in it I didn't. Unfortunately, there are no comments about the story from the judges, so I guess we'll never know what floated their boat.

p.s. 'Auntie' is the nickname of the BBC. Ain't that quaint?

How can it be September already?

This year is going too fast. I need to pick up the pace if I'm going to amount to much in 2011...

Since my last post, progress has been slow with perhaps only one new story completed and another under construction. The two are intended to be companion pieces, in fact. They are written in a way that means they can be read in isolation of each other, but the second story is also written to add a surprising twist to the first. A fun exercise, for sure, but I've not yet given a publishing strategy any thought. Do I send them off individually, or as a pair?

Also since my last post I have joined a new writing group. This one meets every two weeks and has 9 members. We each read submissions ahead of time then spend our meetings talking about the pieces purely in terms of what we liked and what could be developed. Simple. And a lot of fun. As a writer, I believe groups like this are less important for the feedback received, than for developing key critical skills. Writers who don't like to fraternise with other writers in this context are missing the point.

At the last writers' meeting, I presented a prologue and the first half of a chapter for a novel. Yes! A novel. But NO - I am not abandoning the short. I also hate people who think of shorts as merely a means to a more commercial novel-writing end. My novel is a long term project with currently no end in sight and I'll need to keep writing shorts to keep me sane as I go along. We'll see how that goes.

My job - which I wanted because it was part-time - has been full time (more or less) since I took it on last November. But last week I told my boss last week that I would be doing part-time, or she can find a full time replacement. A hard thing to do because I like my job and my boss but I need more time for writing, end of.